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Evan Solomon

92 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Michael Barrett (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the reality is that with the Liberal Prime Minister, just like his Liberal predecessor, Canadians are struggling now more than ever. Groceries, gas and homes have never been more expensive. Members do not have to take my word for it. The Globe and Mail said, in a scathing review, “Canada’s New Government is no more interested in arresting our economic decline than Canada’s Old Government.” We should be the richest and most affordable country on earth, but instead the Liberals are borrowing today and making Canadians of future generations pay it back. Why will the Liberals not deliver relief?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 33%Claims 51%The ask 5%Procedure 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 21 wordsthese guys will find any excuse to talk down Canada and talk down investing in Canada, even in a trade war.PositioningOff point Claims · 47 wordsOur credit rating is the highest in the world.1 We have just lowered the deficit by $11.5 billion, 2and we are using that money to invest in Canadians.Vague promise We are making the largest investments in the skilled trades in our history: 3100,000 jobs in the skilled trades.4 The ask · 5 wordsThe Conservatives should support it. Procedure · 10 wordsOur plan is simple, and I will put it simply: ProcedurePositioning · 9 wordsbuild in Canada, buy in Canada, believe in Canada.Positioning

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