Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Marie-Hélène Gaudreau

456 words · 26 sentences · 32 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 85 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Anecdote 5%Procedure 7%Claims 61%Reasoning 14%The ask 13%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 25 wordswe all have different abilities to focus. I tend to hear everything and see everything. It may be a character flaw, but noise bothers me.Anecdote Procedure · 32 wordsMembers do not have to listen, but I would ask them to be quiet. I will continue by sharing what I experienced and what I have seen over the past few years.Procedure Claims · 25 wordsI hope that my colleague who introduced this bill has had the opportunity to openly discuss the scope of the issue we are talking about. Reasoning · 18 wordsIf someone is pushed to seek MAID as a way to escape suffering, that is of course unacceptable. Claims · 35 wordsWe all agree on that. However, in this case, the bill seeks to punish someone for having a discussion about possible care options that a person may turn to over the course of their life. Reasoning · 5 wordsThat is something else entirely. The ask · 59 wordsWe should be examining the behaviour of certain people who are supposed to show compassion to those at the end of life but who engage in unacceptable behaviour, such as systematically suggesting MAID on the grounds that the person seems to no longer be able to endure their suffering, as if we could simply offer them a way out. Reasoning · 7 wordsIt is not as simple as that. Claims · 216 wordsI have experienced it. Those who raised their hands earlier have experienced it too. There is a problem, and I hope that we will really take care of it.Vague promise We are talking about treatment and care. We have been hearing about this for quite some time. The Standing Committee on Veterans Affairs is currently studying the partners in Canadian veterans rehabilitation services program.1 Right now, we are learning that some specialists do not have what it takes to support veterans, because they do not understand the realities, the trauma or the wait times veterans face. Some veterans have to wait three years.2Off point I can understand when someone comes to the point where they are no longer able to endure what they went through after serving their country.Partly on point They were told that they mattered, they dared to defend their homeland to the point of risking their own life, and then when they came home, they were told to take a number because they could not be served right away. We are currently assessing whether the program is worthwhile and whether the service providers have the skills to meet the standard that veterans deserve.Off point I think it is truly unfortunate that another tactic is being used today to avoid addressing the core issue.Partly on pointHidden agency A committee is currently meeting.3Off point Reasoning · 34 wordsIf we can speak openly together, people will understand that this bill makes no sense if the goal is truly to hold those who act maliciously toward people at the end of life accountable.

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