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Ryan Turnbull

131 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Alexis Brunelle-Duceppe (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, what we are hearing today is astounding. In response to a question my colleague from Pierre-Boucher—Les Patriotes—Verchères asked earlier, the hon. member opposite had the nerve to say that Canada’s new sovereign wealth fund is similar to Norway’s, when, as my colleague explained so well, the two are nothing alike. There is something else that is a little unusual about the Liberals’ argument regarding this new sovereign wealth fund. They claim that this fund is sovereign and independent. However everyone knows perfectly well that these projects will be funded through the Major Projects Office and that they will be the direct result of the Prime Minister’s decisions. The Liberals themselves have said so. When they say that this fund is independent, how can they justify that in a clear, transparent and honest way?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 34%Reasoning 13%Promise 29%Positioning 16%Procedure 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 10 wordsthe member can be assured that this will be independent, Reasoning · 17 wordsbecause it will be set up as a separate Crown corporation with an independent board and CEO, 2Claims · 7 wordsand it will operate under commercial terms.1 Promise · 38 wordsIt will invest money in order to get returns for Canadians. We will see that fund grow over time and continue to invest in large projects that have good financial returns and will pay dividends to everyday Canadians.Vague promise Positioning · 5 wordsIt is a great concept.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 11 wordsI know that members opposite have every right to debate this.Procedure Claims · 9 wordsThat is what the House of Commons is for. Positioning · 16 wordsWhat I take issue with is the overall pessimism they have about a sovereign wealth fund.Positioning Claims · 18 wordsThere are many examples around the world of how this can really help achieve national and generational wealth.Partly on point

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