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Vincent Ho

147 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Arnold Viersen (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, as I rise here today, I would like to congratulate Maria Gainey, who used to work for me. She got engaged on the weekend to her fiancé Toby, so I would like to congratulate them. My question for my hon. colleague is around sovereign wealth funds. Alberta has a heritage fund. This is a thing that has been done already in Canada. This happened at a time when Alberta was making record profits through the oil patch. It has continued and grown to $32 billion today. I am wondering if he has any comments about that.”
Statement grade
B–
74 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 17%Claims 65%Reasoning 18%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 10 wordsthat is exactly where the Liberal government gets it wrong.Positioning Claims · 50 wordsIt would start a new bureaucracy and a new fund to be staffed and overseen by Liberal insiders. The Liberal government, in the past year alone, has already formed 13 new bureaucracies, all of which are overseen or managed by Liberal insiders.1 The government says it would be professionally managed, Positioning · 15 wordsbut it would actually be professionally managed to fail and to benefit only corporate insiders.Positioning Reasoning · 16 wordsThat is one of the biggest differences we see compared to other models that are succeeding. Claims · 31 wordsWe could unleash our resources and attract investment. We do not need to draw on more government debt that is going to be paid off by taxpayers and the next generation. Reasoning · 11 wordsThe sovereign wealth fund should be built on one thing: wealth. Claims · 14 wordsWhat we have a lot of, after 11 years of Liberal governments, is debt.2Partly on point

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