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Kevin Lamoureux

117 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Alexis Brunelle-Duceppe (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada’s new sovereign wealth fund is neither sovereign nor independent, and yet my colleague continues to compare it to Norway’s sovereign wealth fund. The only thing these two funds have in common—because they do indeed have one thing in common—is the name. My question is very specific, and I would like my colleague to answer it. If the government buys a cat and tells everyone it is a horse, does he think people will call it a horse or a cat?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 8%Claims 35%Positioning 17%Promise 34%The ask 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 9 wordsI think Canadians as a whole are very smart. Claims · 41 wordsThey understand that there are dozens of other countries around the world that have some form of sovereign wealth fund.1 The Canada Strong fund that is being created as a national sovereign wealth fund here in Canada is a positive thing.2 Positioning · 20 wordsI can understand the Bloc does not want to see it. I am disappointed that the Conservatives are opposing it, PositioningPartly on pointPromise · 40 wordsbut at the end of the day, this fund will generate significant investments.Vague promise It will provide thousands of jobs, I would ultimately argue, into the future. It will provide an economic boost.Vague promise It will provide improvements in the overall GDP.Vague promise The ask · 7 wordsI believe we should be supporting it.

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