“Mr. Speaker, I have already expressed this: I am disappointed that the Conservative Party does not have enough faith in Canadians and the need for us to have a sovereign wealth fund here in Canada. Many other countries around the world have such a fund. The potential contribution this can make to the economy, to Canadians as a whole, is truly something we should all be excited about. Obviously, the Conservatives want to focus more on their own political party than on building a stronger, healthier Canada. Does the member believe that there is value to wealth funds, whether here or at the provincial level?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 77. The grade is held to 39, 30 above Signal.
39 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 60%Claims 10%Aside 29%Procedure 2%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 46 wordsimagine a founder walking into a VC office and saying, “Hey, I don’t really know what my product is and don’t really have any sort of framework to govern this, but would you give me $25 billion?You can just put it on your credit card.”PositioningClaims · 10 wordsThat is what we are being asked to do here.Aside · 30 wordsThe member asks if I believe in this like it is the tooth fairy or something.I am sorry, I think the tooth fairy is broke in Canada right now.AsidePositioning · 17 wordsWe cannot rely on hope and dreams and all of these sorts of things without tangible plans.PositioningProcedure · 2 wordsThis is—Procedure