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Michelle Rempel Garner

171 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Jasraj Hallan (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, my friend from Calgary Nose Hill is right when she says that real sovereign wealth funds like in Norway run from surpluses, resource revenue or royalties, and they do not invest within Norway because of inflationary issues that could come up from that. I was wondering if she could expand on a point she raised about why Canadians are so concerned about this debt fund by the Liberal Prime Minister given the Liberals’ track record of slush funds, giving money to Liberal-connected insiders and the corruption and scandals we have seen over the last 10 years.”
Statement grade
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Average 86 / 100
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Claims 19%Reasoning 30%Positioning 20%The ask 30%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 21 wordsthere is a character in Greek mythology named Cassandra, somebody who is doomed to know the future but nobody believes them.1Off point Reasoning · 52 wordsI feel like right now all the speeches that are happening are like Cassandra’s speeches: this is going to fail, this is a bad idea, this is not the right decision. This is why the opposition is saying we cannot support this massive expenditure in the form that it is right now. Positioning · 5 wordsIt is crazy, especially given, PositioningClaims · 12 wordsas my colleague said, the government’s poor track record in this regard. Positioning · 29 wordsI do not want to be watching a clip of this speech years from now saying that I was right and nobody listened on that side of the House.PositioningPartly on point The ask · 52 wordsThe government would be better served to say that this is a bad use of tax funds and that there are other things Canadians could benefit from. The government should pump the brakes on this, realize it is not a great idea and vote for this motion today, which supports those principles.

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