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Alexandre Boulerice

168 words · 11 sentences · 11 clauses

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Greeting 10%Claims 33%Thanks 46%Reasoning 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 16 wordsI am immensely proud to rise in tribute to an outstanding milestone reached in Rosemont—La Petite‑Patrie.Greeting Claims · 56 wordsThis year, we are celebrating the 40th anniversary of L’Écho des femmes.1 For four decades, this organization has been much more than a mere gathering spot. It is a pillar of solidarity, a shield against isolation and a driving force for social change. Whether through mutual support, public education or advocacy, L’Écho des femmes transforms lives. Thanks · 55 wordsI would be remiss not to commend one very special woman, Silvia Martinez, for her 35 years of service.2 Silvia is among those considered the lifeblood of the organization. She is a voice for women who have too little voice left. Her dedication to justice and her cheerful ways have left their mark on generations.Thanks Reasoning · 18 wordsIn a world of persisting inequality and violence, we need L’Écho des femmes and women like Silvia Martinez. Thanks · 23 wordsOn behalf of the people of Rosemont—La Petite‑Patrie, I want to thank them and wish them many more years of combat and victory.Thanks

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