Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Simon-Pierre Savard-Tremblay

147 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

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Claims 39%Anecdote 14%Positioning 23%Aside 9%Thanks 14%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 35 wordslast Friday, to her loved ones’ shock, Guylaine Barré breathed her last.1 This morning’s Courrier de Saint-Hyacinthe got it right: She was a “merchant of happiness”.2 Guylaine was a fixture in our region’s business community. Anecdote · 21 wordsIt gave me great joy to interact with her regularly because my offices were located downtown near her shop, Rita Fleuriste, AnecdoteClaims · 8 wordswhich she ran so passionately for 40 years.3 Positioning · 21 wordsFew entrepreneurs could ever leave such a lasting impression on us. She was cheerful and energetic, and her smile was contagious.Positioning Aside · 13 wordsListing all of her qualities would take much longer than my allotted time.Aside Positioning · 13 wordsJust as she herself adored flowers, Guylaine was surely a rose among thorns.Positioning Thanks · 19 wordsOn behalf of the Bloc Québécois, I extend my deepest condolences to her family and everyone at Rita Fleuriste.Thanks Claims · 15 wordsMake no mistake, an entire community has been mourning her loss for nearly a week. Thanks · 2 wordsFarewell, Guylaine.Thanks

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