Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 53%Anecdote 12%Reasoning 22%Thanks 13%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 33 wordsover the past few weeks, I had the pleasure of seeing young people from Mont-Saint-Bruno—L’Acadie, where I visited several schools.I spoke with students and staff at École de Monseigneur-Gilles-Gervais and École Albert-Schweitzer.1Anecdote · 14 wordsI was moved by their curiosity, their motivation and their interest in the future.AnecdoteClaims · 30 wordsI also had the pleasure of welcoming students on Parliament Hill from Heritage Regional High School.2They came to see how our democracy works.Their questions were clear and thoughtful.Reasoning · 26 wordsThese meetings are important.They show that we need to help our schools.They also show the need to help young people participate in civic life.Thanks · 15 wordsI thank the principals, teachers and, above all, the students for their hospitality and energy.Thanks