Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 22%Anecdote 61%Positioning 17%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 23 wordsmy dear Montreal Canadiens, the second-youngest team in the National Hockey League, are competing in the Stanley Cup Playoffs following an exciting season.12Anecdote · 91 wordsIt brings back memories of my childhood in Montreal, when I could watch the Canadiens practise at the Verdun Auditorium, standing just a few feet from the legends that lit up the Forum and our TV set.We know their names: Dryden, Savard, Robinson, Lapointe, Lafleur, Lemaire, Shutt, Gainey, Cournoyer.During those same years, when I was in high school, just a stone’s throw from the old Forum, we experienced three incredible Stanley Cups.3Three times I was in detention, smiling, for having skipped school to attend the Stanley Cup parade.AnecdoteClaims · 10 wordsWe have just as much pride in today’s young Habs.Positioning · 26 wordsI now summon all the ghosts of the old Montreal Forum, with all the fans from LaSalle—Émard—Verdun and across the country, to shout, “Go Habs, go”.Positioning