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Patty Hajdu

97 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Melissa Lantsman (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I am glad that the minister improved her self-control this time around. I am not surprised that another Trudeau holdover is pretending that everything is fine. The reality is that the Liberal government has killed the middle class. It has killed the very workers that it is now purporting to protect for more than a decade, with higher taxes and inflationary spending. The $37 billion of new spending from the latest credit card budget is only going to make things worse. Everybody knows that. Once again, will the government stop these delusions and stop the spending so that Canadians can actually get ahead?”
Statement grade
B–
70 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 22%Claims 62%Promise 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordsI do not know which Canadians the member is talking about, PositioningClaims · 60 wordsbut let me talk about some of the hard-working people across the country who are working so hard together to build up this country, people like electricians, plumbers, automotive technicians, crane operators and heavy-equipment operators. In fact, many are our sons and daughters all across this country are getting their skilled trades training, but having a hard time getting through. Promise · 16 wordsMembers should know that we are going to make sure that no one gets left behind.Partly on pointVague promise Positioning · 10 wordsIt is more than we can say for these guys.PositioningOff point

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