“Mr. Speaker, I am thrilled to hear that I left an impression on the minister. What I am struck by is the fact that absolutely nothing has been resolved, despite what she just said. The tariffs are still in place. In fact, they actually went up for all steel-related products. This is a disaster. Too many businesses are shutting down. That is the true state of affairs. The members on the other side of the House are spouting fine words, but the reality is totally different. What we got from the Prime Minister’s economic update was a budget containing yet more spending but no concrete solutions to the problems we face today. Does the minister have anything relevant to say?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 78 / 100
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Claims 61%Positioning 28%Reasoning 11%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 15 wordsour concrete solutions are clear.In the past six months, we have created 96,000 jobs.1Positioning · 12 wordsThat is far more than would have been created by the Conservatives.PositioningClaims · 43 wordsIn addition, we have succeeded in maintaining the second-strongest growth in the G7 and the strongest fiscal position.2Of course we know that Canadians need help.We know that gas prices have gone up.3We know that grocery prices are still too high.Reasoning · 10 wordsThat is why we have a strong social safety net.Positioning · 15 wordsThat is why we are here to help Canadians from coast to coast to coast.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise