“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals have enough money to provide nearly $40 billion in aid to oil companies in the economic update, but not a penny for the media, which is in the midst of a crisis and facing widespread layoffs; not a penny for seniors struggling with the rising cost of living; and not a penny for our small and medium-sized businesses facing U.S. tariffs. On the other hand, when it comes time to say yes to the oil companies, the Liberals rush to do so. Why do billionaire oil companies come before everyone else?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 76 / 100
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Positioning 19%Claims 53%Promise 28%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 20 wordsI hope my colleague is kidding.PositioningI do not think he even believes his own words when he reads them.Motive imputedClaims · 32 wordsThis morning, I spoke with my new colleague, my new counterpart, Quebec’s minister of economy, innovation and energy, Bernard Drainville.1We have agreed on several projects that are fundamental to Quebec’s economy.2Off pointPromise · 20 wordsFurthermore, we will very soon be announcing assistance for our small and medium-sized businesses in the steel and aluminum sectors.Vague promiseClaims · 24 wordsWe know that the White House’s interpretation of tariffs has changed.3We know that businesses across the country, including in Quebec, are being affected.Promise · 10 wordsThat is why we will be there to help them.Vague promise