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Pat Kelly

119 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Caroline Desrochers (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, what I find really unfortunate is that the official opposition has about 15 days a year to bring intelligent debate to the House. On top of that, they have about 45 minutes a day to hold the government to account. However, instead of engaging in real debates and real discussions, they spend their time reciting slogans and criticizing everything the government does. Today, we spent the day arguing about the name of a sovereign wealth fund when, in fact, the purpose of this fund is to build Canada strong, and that is what Canadians need right now. On this side of the House, we are responsible, we are ambitious and we continue to deliver for Canadians. We are capable of imagining the future and we are not afraid to make the necessary decisions. Do the Conservatives have a plan or an alternative? I have not heard them talk about that.”
Statement grade
D+
54 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 18%Claims 33%Reasoning 50%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 4 wordsit is a shame, PositioningClaims · 27 wordsbecause she must not have listened to my speech. I was very clear about the approach the Liberals should take and the approach they should not take. Positioning · 17 wordsIt takes a staggering amount of arrogance to judge and presume what is important to the opposition, PositioningReasoning · 32 wordsand to say that we should not use an opposition day to oppose a terrible policy being proposed by the government and to propose alternatives. That is what opposition days are for. Claims · 12 wordsIn question period, we ask important questions that need to be answered. Reasoning · 27 wordsWe do not need to be told by the government what questions we should ask or which of its policies we should oppose or propose alternatives to.Off point

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