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Ryan Turnbull

222 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, yesterday the member had some time to talk about the sovereign wealth fund. That is a major aspect of the spring budget update. I think it makes a very powerful message to Canadians that the government and the Prime Minister are committed to get the funds that are necessary to build Canada strong, which is great for all Canadians. I wonder if the member could just provide his thoughts, upon reflection on the discussions in the chamber yesterday, where the Conservatives and the Bloc came together in opposition to the sovereign wealth fund, as to why they might want to reconsider that position.”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 7%Positioning 28%Claims 55%Reasoning 10%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 15 wordsI thank my hon. colleague for the opportunity to speak to this a little more.Thanks Positioning · 51 wordsIn my view right now, Canadians across the country believe in our country and in the strength of our country. They are resilient, but they want to help build the strongest economy in the G7. They are aligned with that vision, and I think people want to participate meaningfully in that.Positioning Claims · 77 wordsThe sovereign wealth fund would give them an opportunity, a retail opportunity, to invest small amounts of money that are highly protected from any downside risk and that will get high returns, based on investments across Canada in major pieces of infrastructure that I know many of us are very proud to see are starting to get built. In my area, at the Darlington new nuclear facility, four small modular reactors are getting built, with 21,700 jobs.1 Positioning · 3 wordsIt is exciting.Positioning Claims · 45 wordsIt is going to add $38 billion to Canada’s GDP over time.2 This is a good example of a project that will be highly revenue-generating and that many pension plans in Canada and around the world, such as the Canada Growth Fund, have invested in.3 Reasoning · 23 wordsThe idea here is to make sure the Canadian public can also benefit from the prosperity and wealth that we are building together.Vague promise Positioning · 8 wordsThat is exciting, and Canadians want to participate.PositioningOff point

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