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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 59 wordstoday marks 12 years since I have had the privilege of becoming the member of Parliament for my constituency, now known as Côte-du-Sud—Rivière-du-Loup—Kataskomiq—Témiscouata.1I was first elected in 2009 and, 2although I lost by nine votes during the “orange wave” a year and a half later, that gave me the determination to return in 2015 to continue my work.3Reasoning · 26 wordsThe greatest satisfaction as an MP is helping people resolve the issues that worry them.There is nothing more rewarding than helping to improve people’s lives.Thanks · 72 wordsThroughout all these years, I have been fortunate to be able to count on an exceptional person: Annie Francoeur.She has guided and supported me every step of the way, and she managed four of my six election campaigns.4I would be remiss if I did not mention the incredible work of the rest of my team: Denise, An, Annie, Lauriane and Marianne, who give their all, every day, for my constituents.ThanksClaims · 40 wordsBeing an MP is an immense privilege.It also comes with great responsibility, and I hope to live up to the expectations of the people of my riding, both here in Ottawa and in the most beautiful riding in Canada.Thanks · 9 wordsI would like to thank all of my constituents.Thanks