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Ben Carr

165 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 22 wordsI rise to recognize the remarkable career of Scott Oake, a proud Winnipegger and one of Canada’s most trusted voices in sports.1Procedure Claims · 55 wordsFor decades on Hockey Night in Canada, Scott brought Canadians together, not merely through highlights and interviews but also through his storytelling that captured the people behind our game.2 Scott has the rare ability to connect, to listen and to let others shine. He reflected the best of who we are back to the nation. Procedure · 7 wordsBeyond broadcasting, his impact runs even deeper.Procedure Claims · 28 wordsThrough the Bruce Oake Recovery Centre, founded in memory of his son, Scott and his late wife Anne helped transform lives and brought hope to families facing addiction.3 Thanks · 41 wordsAs Scott steps away from the broadcast booth, Canadians, especially Winnipeggers, thank him for a career defined by excellence, compassion and leadership.4 I congratulate Scott on an extraordinary career, and I thank him for everything he has given to our country.Thanks Claims · 12 wordsWe look forward to having him back among his people in Winnipeg.

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