Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Mike Kelloway

143 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

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Thanks 29%Claims 61%Procedure 3%Reasoning 5%Promise 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 12 wordsI rise today to recognize an incredible group of young Cape Bretoners.Thanks Claims · 74 wordsIn February, the Get Up & Get Organized Youth Summit brought together nearly 50 youth and community members in Sydney to tackle real issues: 1food security, housing, climate change and active transportation. Co-developed and led by youth aged 15 to 24, the summit gave young people a space to be heard, to lead and to build hope for our communities.2 I had the privilege of meeting with the youth planning committee on April 1.3 Procedure · 4 wordsIts message was clear: ProcedureClaims · 13 wordsYoung people care deeply about Cape Breton’s future and want decision-makers to listen. Thanks · 29 wordsI want to recognize the youth leaders, Isaac, Lily, Jordyn and Claire, along with Nova Scotia Health, the Ecology Action Centre and every partner organization that made this possible.4Thanks Reasoning · 7 wordsThe voices of Cape Breton’s youth matter, Promise · 4 wordsand we are listening.Vague promise

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