“Madam Speaker, the new U.S. tariffs announced on April 6 specifically target Quebec’s SMEs. The economic update should have included protection for Quebec against these tariffs, but it is completely absent from the document. The economic update needs an update, and it needs it now. Quebec lost 300 jobs this week. How many more Quebeckers will face the same fate before the government finally introduces a wage subsidy?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 72 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Claims · 16 wordsyes, the situation is serious.Our neighbours continue to change the rules of the game arbitrarily.Positioning · 10 wordsAlthough they are still our neighbours, they are completely unreliable.PositioningPartly on pointProcedure · 11 wordsFirst, it is important to identify the source of the problem.ProcedureClaims · 26 wordsIt stems from our neighbours’ completely senseless actions.Partly on pointWe are putting the necessary programs in place to help our businesses get through this very difficult time.Vague promisePromise · 4 wordsAnnouncements are coming soon.Vague promiseReasoning · 10 wordsWe need to remain flexible in how we provide support.Partly on pointPromise · 9 wordsWe will be making announcements on this very soon.Vague promise