“Madam Speaker, Loaves & Fishes serves more than 15,000 in more than 44 communities on the island. They are vital, and they are growing, with a new 24,000-square-foot warehouse set to open this month. Some 80% of Canadians say food prices have increased more than any other expense. Groceries, without meat or cheese, regularly cost $100 a bag on the island, yet the Liberal government continues to tell Canadians they have never had it so good. Every measure we propose, they oppose. How many food bank expansions do the Liberals need to see before they stop their costly credit card spending and actually bring food costs down for Canadians?”
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Thanks 9%Positioning 39%Claims 52%
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Madam Speaker, Thanks · 10 wordsI have a lot of respect for my colleague opposite.ThanksPositioning · 19 wordsComing from British Columbia, we know that British Columbians want to see measures that are going to support them.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 56 wordsThat is why things like the groceries and essentials benefit are helping Canadians.1It is going to be in their bank accounts on June 5.2They want to see measures like the reduction in the fuel tax, which is saving 10¢ a litre, 3and that is keeping money in their pockets between now and Labour Day.4Positioning · 23 wordsThey want to see the steps that we are taking.Vague promiseBritish Columbia can see that we are doing the work to support Canadians.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise