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Mario Simard

178 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Tamara Kronis (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, I thank the member for his thoughtful remarks. As he can see from my exchanges with him and his colleagues in French, I want to understand the needs of all Canadians, including those in Quebec. We share concerns about forestry and the government’s lack of attention to major challenges facing our communities. What struck me was the absence of the term “substance abuse”. The government eliminated the position of minister of mental health and addictions and does not seem to care about the crisis plaguing my community. To what extent could Quebec be affected by this as well?”
Statement grade
C–
58 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 26%Claims 32%Procedure 4%Anecdote 16%Positioning 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 35 wordsI would like to thank my colleague and congratulate her on her excellent French, even though she has not been speaking it for very long. Everyone in the Bloc Québécois agrees that she is remarkable.ThanksUnearned certainty Claims · 17 wordsIn my view, issues relating to substance abuse and health fall under the Government of Quebec’s jurisdiction. Procedure · 8 wordsI am not trying to avoid her question.Procedure Anecdote · 28 wordsI would, however, like to point out that I have rarely agreed with the leader of the official opposition, but I do agree with him on one thing.AnecdotePartly on point Claims · 27 wordsHe has pointed out on numerous occasions that the major oil and gas companies are acting like corporate welfare claimants by asking the federal government for money. Positioning · 39 wordsI know the Conservatives are in favour of defending the energy sector tooth and nail, but they would not stoop so low as to take money from Canadians and hand it over to the greedy oil and gas sector, PositioningClaims · 13 wordswhich is making record profits and sending them back to the United States.1 Thanks · 11 wordsOn that point, I congratulate the leader of the official opposition.Thanks

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