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Guillaume Deschênes-Thériault

108 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Clifford Small (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, I listened to my colleague’s speech on the spring economic statement. I know that he comes from a riding in New Brunswick where salmon are paramount in Restigouche. The Minister of Fisheries announced $82 million towards making Atlantic salmon as they once were, in a great healthy state. At the same time that she made that announcement, she cut two biodiversity centres, which were long established, one in New Brunswick, the member’s home province, and one in Nova Scotia. In my province of Newfoundland and Labrador, she has not even laid out contracts for river guardians this year. If we do not protect spawners, then there will be no spawn, and salmon will be finished. Will the member question the minister to make sure she puts her money where her mouth is?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 62%Anecdote 11%Promise 27%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 36 wordsI am glad to hear my colleague mention the $3.8-billion nature strategy, 1which includes an investment of $82 million to protect Atlantic salmon.2 The Restigouche River is internationally recognized for its waters, where salmon are plentiful. Anecdote · 12 wordsIt is in my riding and I am very proud of that.Anecdote Claims · 15 wordsI have actually been having ongoing discussions with the Minister of Fisheries regarding this investment. Promise · 29 wordsI look forward to seeing how these investments will translate into real measures to better protect salmon habitat in the Restigouche River and other salmon-rich rivers in Atlantic Canada. Claims · 16 wordsIn fact, we are also investing in other projects to protect salmon habitat in our river.Off point

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