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Ben Carr

140 words · 5 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Dane Lloyd (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, I think my colleague will agree that the crime rates in this country are far too high, and that is why I think Canadians were very hopeful when the government announced that it would be hiring 1,000 new RCMP officers. However, we have recently learned that of the 1,000 RCMP officers the government claimed it was hiring, only 750 of them are actually going to be frontline officers; 250 of them are going to be civilian support employees. It gets better. The government, under its early retirement incentive, laid off over 300 civilian employees from the RCMP. The government says it is hiring 250 more employees, but it has let go 300 employees and is bringing in only 750 frontline officers. This is an investment illusion under the government. Why is it failing to protect our streets, by underinvesting in police?”
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30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 51%Procedure 22%Reasoning 26%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 72 wordsI met with police officers from the Winnipeg police union a couple of days ago in Ottawa.1 I can say that their view was very different, as was that of police chiefs from across the country. For example, Bill C-14, which would bring in tougher penalties for repeat offenders, particularly those who are using weapons and violence in the crimes they are committing, is being welcomed across the board in this country.2Off point Procedure · 31 wordsIn addition to that, I want to go back to a component of my speech that talked about the importance of investing in supports for mental health and addictions, and homelessness.Procedure Reasoning · 37 wordsLots of crime is born out of poverty and out of very difficult conditions that people find themselves in, so by making investments in people through social services, we help to reduce crime rates in this country.Off point

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