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Pat Kelly

85 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Mark Gerretsen (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I appreciate the member’s comments toward the end of his speech about the use of the word député, which, as he knows, means “member of Parliament” in French. However, I am curious whether the member is equally as concerned about the time the member for Brantford—Brant South—Six Nations stood in the House in the middle of question period and, when he was responded to in French, challenged the minister for responding in French. The member said he wished he had answered the question in English. He must be equally as outraged about when that happened. Is that correct?”
Statement grade
C–
59 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 69%Claims 31%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 59 wordsI think the member completely missed the point. I was not speaking of the Prime Minister’s use of French or English. I was talking about his use of the English word “deputy” when clearly characterizing his MPs as his deputies.1 The Prime Minister thinks that the MPs of his party are his deputies, just there to do his work.Positioning Claims · 26 wordsHowever, they are elected by the people of Canada. All MPs are elected by the people of Canada.2 Nobody is the Prime Minister’s deputy around here.Partly on point

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