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Wayne Long

85 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Melissa Lantsman (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister promised to spend less, but then he spent $35 billion more in the last fiscal update alone. He promised to lower the debt; instead, the deficit doubled from just one year ago. He promised fiscal brilliance, but the not even so conservative Globe and Mail calls that “an inversion of reality”. Once an expensive Liberal, always an expensive Liberal. This year, Canadian families will write a cheque for $3,400 just to cover the interest on the Liberal debt. Why will the Prime Minister not stop forcing Canadians to pay the credit card bill, and just allow them to get by?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 76%Positioning 24%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 65 wordsCanada’s new government is committed to build a strong, resilient and independent economy.Vague promise Despite what we hear opposite, our economy is strong.Partly on point The IMF projects our economy to be one of the most resilient, fastest-growing in th G7.1 We are going to continue to build the economy.Vague promise The spring economic update invests $6 billion in the trades, 2and it invests in the sovereign wealth fund.3 Positioning · 20 wordsOn this side, we are continuing to build a strong economy.Vague promise That side can continue with the rhymes and rhetoric.PositioningOff point

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