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Mélanie Joly

85 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Luc Berthold (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, add another zero for the minister’s answer. When a student gets nothing but zeros, they fail. This Liberal government is racking up zeros, and Canadians are paying the price for its failure. What is the result? Grocery prices are skyrocketing, housing is unaffordable, and gas costs a fortune because the Liberal Prime Minister is racking up debt like there is no tomorrow. However, tomorrow it will be our children who will have to pay off this debt, along with the interest that comes with it. Will the Prime Minister, who is just another costly Liberal, finally put an end to his costly budgets funded by the national credit card?”
Statement grade
C–
Average 58 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 32%Aside 8%Procedure 24%Claims 27%Promise 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsI give my colleague 100% for following his leader’s instructions.Mockery He just had to read the question he is asking us today.PositioningOff point Aside · 7 wordsHe is full of jokes this morning.Aside Procedure · 12 wordsWe are going to give him a little lesson on the numbers.Procedure Claims · 23 wordsRight now, Canada’s economic growth is the second highest among the G7 countries.1 We also have the strongest fiscal position in the G7.2Partly on point Procedure · 8 wordsThose are the numbers. Those are the facts.Procedure Positioning · 5 wordsWe have a solid plan, PositioningPromise · 8 wordsand we are going to stand by it.Partly on pointVague promise

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