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Lena Metlege Diab

77 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Fred Davies (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the media panels have given up on this immigration minister. Bob Fife, the bureau chief of The Globe and Mail, called her performance “pathetic” and her “incompetent” twice in the same panel. Even CBC’s David Cochrane said, “when they fall back on privacy, process and the passive voice, it’s usually a sign of some trouble.” Immigration is a serious issue and the Prime Minister is ultimately accountable for the minister’s failures. When will the Prime Minister finally take responsibility, and fire this minister?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 65 / 100
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Aside 13%Positioning 22%Procedure 12%Claims 53%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 10 wordsI appreciate the love from members on the other side.Aside Positioning · 17 wordsI know they know that we are restoring control, balance, sustainability and integrity to our immigration system.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise Procedure · 4 wordsThe facts show this.ProcedureUnearned certainty Claims · 34 wordsWe have new express entry categories to grow our economy.1 We have strengthened our rural immigration pathways.2 We are facilitating work permits for researchers and Ph.D. students.3 We have surpassed our francophone immigration targets.4Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsThe list can go on.Procedure Claims · 7 wordsWe have 5,000 additional physicians coming to—5Partly on point

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