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Lena Metlege Diab

94 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Brad Redekopp (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, wow, I did not know that we had express entry for terrorists. It is clear that everyone has lost faith in the Minister of Immigration overseeing even the simplest parts of her job. This is the seventh Liberal immigration minister, and Conservatives knew from day one that she would make the mess worse. The media are now calling for the minister to be removed. Liberal MPs have called for this minister to be removed. This is now about the Prime Minister’s own judgment. She says that she meets with the Prime Minister every week. He seems oblivious to the mess she has created. Will the Prime Minister end this national embarrassment and fire this immigration minister?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 16%Claims 69%Positioning 9%Reasoning 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 15 wordslet me continue with my list because I need a couple of hours for that.Procedure Claims · 44 wordsWe are bringing our numbers down.Vague promise We are strengthening oversight.Vague promise We have an action plan that would restore integrity to our immigration system.Vague promise CBSA removed 22,000 people from the country last year.1 We brought in Bill C-12, 2which the Conservatives opposed in the beginning, 3Positioning · 8 wordsbut they saw the light at the end.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsThat bill will put additional security in place. I have also put in place the foundation of an exit tracking system, 4Reasoning · 6 wordswhich Canada needs in this country.Partly on point

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