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Steven MacKinnon

72 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Alexandre Boulerice (Independent)
“Mr. Speaker, despite the government’s promises, people are struggling to make ends meet, especially in Montreal. According to the Institut de recherche et d’informations socioéconomiques, Montreal is the most expensive city in Quebec. A family of two adults and two children in Montreal would need to be bringing in $88,800 after taxes to have a livable income. A livable income is enough to meet basic needs with a little bit extra for a rainy day. That is all, but thousands of people do not have that. Rather than helping their billionaire friends, when will the Liberals take action so that everyone can live with dignity?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 44%Positioning 25%Promise 7%Procedure 7%The question 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 24 wordslet us think about the dental care program, pharmacare, the school food program, the increase to old age security and the Canada child benefit.1 Positioning · 18 wordsCanada is always there to help the less fortunate, those who need a hand to make ends meet.Positioning Promise · 5 wordsIt will always be there.Vague promise Procedure · 5 wordsThe real question is this: ProcedureThe question · 12 wordsWhen will we get the support of all members of this House? Claims · 8 wordsThe Conservatives are always voting against these measures.2Off point

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