“Mr. Speaker, witnesses at the national defence committee made it clear that many survivors want a choice between the military and civilian justice systems. Could the member explain why preserving that choice is so important?”
Statement grade
A+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 98 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 62%Reasoning 7%Procedure 7%The ask 25%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 21 wordsit comes down to victims’ having the choice.They need to feel safe.They feel betrayed.They want to have options, Reasoning · 6 wordsbecause they want to be heard.Procedure · 6 wordsThis is what I am saying: ProcedureClaims · 36 wordsThe Liberal government is ignoring and shutting them out, and they have already been traumatized.We have seen that time and time again, not only in the defence committee but also in the veterans affairs committee.The ask · 23 wordsIt is not time to shut people out.It is time to give them options.It is time to let them be heard.
