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Alex Ruff

149 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Simon-Pierre Savard-Tremblay (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I am a member of the committee that conducted the study for weeks and that succeeded, with our Conservative colleagues, in getting a majority to adopt amendments. These amendments were informed by witness testimony and greatly improved the bill. We worked patiently for weeks. We heard from witnesses who told us where we needed to go. I believe that we managed to move this bill in the right direction. What does my colleague call a government that does not respect the verdict of parliamentary democracy, when a majority of members have decided to move the bill in one direction, but this government is trying to overturn that by moving the bill in the other direction?”
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Average 88 / 100
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Aside 7%Positioning 9%Reasoning 43%Claims 41%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 11 wordsI could use a really derogatory term, but I will not.Aside Positioning · 13 wordsMy point is that it is the government that is making a mistake.Positioning Reasoning · 14 wordsUltimately, I think we need to get this right. This is about the victims.Partly on point Claims · 10 wordsThe committee did so much hard work. The witnesses testified. Reasoning · 12 wordsI am not taking anything away from what Justice Arbour brought forward. Claims · 51 wordsThis is a tough position for the CAF and the senior leadership of the CAF.Partly on point However, I dare say that if we go back and review the testimony put forward at committee by the Canadian Forces provost marshal and the Canadian director of military prosecutions, they weighed their concerns on this.1 Reasoning · 38 wordsAgain, this is ultimately about taking care of the victims.Partly on point I do not think the government is going to get it right if it removes the hard work of the committee and what it put forward as recommendations.

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