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Abdelhaq Sari

111 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Jeff Kibble (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, clearly the member opposite understands neither the bill nor military chain of command. Removing the committee’s amendments, ignoring overwhelming evidence of the experts and MST survivors and, even worse, adding amendments without going to committee is not democracy, transparency or collaboration. The significant majority of military sexual misconduct cases will not meet the threshold of civilian jurisdiction, and of the cases that do meet the threshold, the civilian justice system has testified that it has the capacity to deal with only a fraction of them. Knowing that, what is the Liberals’ plan to prosecute these cases and bring justice in the majority of them? Are they just going to give a free pass to predators?”
Statement grade
C
Average 64 / 100
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Procedure 18%Thanks 7%Claims 75%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 20 wordsmy colleague may not share my point of view, and our understanding of the matter differs, as he pointed out.Procedure Thanks · 8 wordsI would like to thank him for that.Thanks Claims · 83 wordsIn this matter, what we are saying is that someone in the same chain of command could harm a complainant’s career. We want to maintain that independence.Vague promise We want to give that freedom to the person who wishes to file a complaint.Vague promise We want the person to have that freedom, that comfort and that peace of mind once the complaint is filed.Vague promise We are always open to suggestions, Vague promisebut as I said, we do not necessarily share the same understanding on both sides.Partly on point

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