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Tamara Kronis

117 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to James Bezan (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to thank my colleague from Nanaimo—Ladysmith for her very strong speech, and for taking the time to actually review the testimony that we heard in committee and using that in her debate today on Bill C-11 now that we have closure on it. The Liberals continually use the Arbour report as their shield and explanation for why they are plowing ahead with these changes, which military justice experts and veterans are saying they do not want. The interesting fact is that the committee heard from the very survivors of military sexual trauma, who also talked to Justice Arbour. It was discovered that over the last five years, since they brought choice into the system and things were moved to the civilian system, they were not receiving justice because of the Jordan framework and the higher thresholds to prosecute. At the end of the day, there was no accountability in the chain of command. Could my colleague please comment on that, as well?”
Statement grade
C
Average 64 / 100
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Anecdote 35%Claims 29%Positioning 19%Reasoning 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 41 wordsI had the privilege, before I was elected to this place, of being able to work with Madam Justice Arbour for a year when I worked at the ICTY in The Hague.1 I know the kind of work that she does.Anecdote Claims · 34 wordsThere is no doubt in my mind that the work she did and the report she provided allowed our military to make progress with respect to the issues that are addressed in this bill. Positioning · 22 wordsI only wish that the defence minister had taken the time to listen to people the way that Madam Justice Arbour does, PositioningReasoning · 20 wordsand possibly to consult with her so that we could have avoided the mistakes that were made with this bill.Partly on pointHidden agency

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