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Xavier Barsalou-Duval

196 words · 12 sentences · 16 clauses

Replying to Karim Bardeesy (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I really enjoyed my colleague’s speech and that of my colleague from Joliette—Manawan . My colleague talked about Quebec businesses. As a member from Ontario and parliamentary secretary, I am more concerned with businesses in Ontario, but I know that the minister and my colleague, the parliamentary secretary and member for Marc-Aurèle-Fortin, are very involved with Quebec businesses. I also appreciate my colleague’s comments on specific businesses. My colleague from Joliette—Manawan and I heard about them at the Standing Committee on Industry and Technology. Now, I have a question for him. We know that the government has just made major investments in the port of Contrecoeur. Will these investments help the companies he is talking about?”
Statement grade
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Average 87 / 100
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Claims 56%Positioning 21%The ask 15%Reasoning 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 16 wordsI do not see any connection between his question and the issue we are discussing today. Positioning · 31 wordsIt is a shame, because we are in a difficult situation where people are worried about their jobs, and the government is trying to distract us by bringing up other topics.Positioning The ask · 29 wordsI would urge my colleague to focus instead on the problem we have brought to the table today and to talk to his colleagues so we can resolve this.Partly on point Claims · 21 wordsLet us take the “buy Canadian” policy as an example. Before Christmas, the government promised to make buying Canadian a priority.1 Positioning · 5 wordsWhat happened in the end?Positioning Claims · 52 wordsA few weeks later, the government could have bought Canadian steel to build future ferries in the Vancouver area, but instead decided to give that contract to the Chinese. That is $1 billion going to China.2 We could also talk about the renewal of Via Rail’s fleet. A contract is coming up. Positioning · 6 wordsWill it be awarded to Alstom, PositioningClaims · 20 wordsor will it go to Siemens again, like last time, when the Americans were given $1 billion to build it?3 Reasoning · 16 wordsIt is important to choose to keep our people employed rather than constantly sending money abroad.

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