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Jason Groleau

138 words · 12 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Kurt Holman (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, earlier, the member for Winnipeg North said negotiations take time. As the representative for London—Fanshawe, we have a large manufacturing base. These tariffs are hitting Canada, and especially my riding, hard. My concern is what I should tell my constituents who have to line up at the food bank and are now in the unemployment line in the manufacturing sectors, especially the auto sector, which has been hit hard by the tariffs. I wonder if my hon. colleague could expand on how the tariffs are hurting his riding as much as they are hurting London—Fanshawe.”
Statement grade
A–
Average 88 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 4%Claims 63%Anecdote 7%Reasoning 7%Positioning 7%The ask 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 5 wordsI thank my esteemed colleague.Greeting Claims · 49 wordsAs I mentioned earlier, my riding is on the U.S. border. We have lived alongside the U.S. for decades. Some of the companies in my riding do 90% of their total business, not just exports, on the other side of the tariffs.1 We are right up against the border. Anecdote · 10 wordsIt is like the bridge here between Ottawa and Gatineau.Anecdote Claims · 16 wordsMy colleague needs to understand that we have been physically dealing with the U.S. for years. Reasoning · 9 wordsThat is why our businesses are hurting so much. Claims · 22 wordsAs I said earlier, the people of Beauce do not want money. They do not want to be dependent on the government. Positioning · 10 wordsThey want this government to step up and show leadership.Positioning The ask · 17 wordsThey want it to call our U.S. counterparts, sit down with them and negotiate a win-win deal.Partly on point

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