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Kevin Lamoureux

195 words · 15 sentences · 17 clauses

Replying to Tamara Jansen (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, 2.6 million Canadian jobs depend on getting those tariffs resolved, and a year in, there is still no deal, no timeline and no negotiation. The Prime Minister cannot even decide if our relationship with the U.S. is broken or stronger than ever. When will the government stop the mixed messages and start real negotiations to remove these tariffs?”
Statement grade
D+
53 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 7%Claims 54%Positioning 21%Promise 18%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI was not necessarily going to bring it up, but I think I will.Procedure Claims · 35 wordsThe member’s colleague from Oshawa, as members will remember, travelled to the United States. On behalf of the Conservative Party of Canada, he went to the United States and met with the vice-president and President.1 Positioning · 10 wordsWhat did he say to Canadians when he came back?Positioning Claims · 62 wordsHe said that he believed Canadians were having a “hissy fit.”2 That is the message he gave to Canadians. I understand that this member went back just last week.3 I think he even took a couple of his Conservative colleagues. The leader of the Conservative Party seemed to be somewhat shell-shocked when he found out that a team of Conservatives went there. Positioning · 19 wordsWe have no idea what the Conservatives genuinely believe on the trade agreement between Canada and the United States.PositioningOff point Claims · 8 wordsAll they say is to get it done.Partly on point Promise · 28 wordsThe Government of Canada will get it done.Vague promise We are going to get it done in a timely fashion that ensures we get the best deal for Canadians.Vague promise Positioning · 12 wordsThere is no selling out Canada on this side of the House.Positioning Promise · 7 wordsWe are going to work hard for—Partly on pointVague promise

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