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Guillaume Deschênes-Thériault

122 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Tim Watchorn (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, Les Pays-d’en-Haut has about 1,000 lakes. My riding is home to a great business called Multinautic that manufactures aluminum docks. It was able to take advantage of a tariff response grant. The company’s employees are very happy because they export a large part of their production to the United States. I would like my colleague to explain how tariff response strategies work for small and medium-sized businesses.”
Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
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Procedure 8%Claims 75%Positioning 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 10 wordsin my speech, I mentioned the importance of concrete examples.Procedure Claims · 55 wordsWhen we announce an additional $500 million through the tariff response initiative, for example, what does that mean for small and medium-sized businesses in our regions?1 It means support for businesses in Les Pays-d’en-Haut. It also means support for businesses like Max Steel in Madawaska—Restigouche to modernize, adapt, retool and deal with the current challenges.2 Positioning · 21 wordsIn and of itself, I believe that this support is about more than just numbers to be debated in the House.Positioning Claims · 36 wordsIt is about concrete assistance that makes a difference for our businesses, helps create and maintain good jobs in our regions and rural areas, and opens up new opportunities for these businesses to continue to prosper.

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