Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Joël Godin

195 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 11%Thanks 20%Reasoning 18%Promise 11%Anecdote 41%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 21 wordsas the end of the school year approaches, I am delighted to address all the graduates in my riding of Portneuf—Jacques-Cartier.1Greeting Thanks · 39 wordsI offer my heartfelt congratulations to each and every one of them. Their tenacity and determination have helped them reach this important milestone. The future belongs to them, and I hope it will be a happy and promising one.Thanks Reasoning · 22 wordsA responsible government must keep our country’s spending in check and reduce the deficit so that our young people can feel secure. Promise · 21 wordsI assure them of my commitment, as part of the official opposition, to work every day on behalf of our youth.2Vague promise Anecdote · 79 wordsOn a personal note, I would also like to add that I am now a proud grandfather.3 I have had the immense joy of welcoming little Éloïse into the family; 4she is the apple of her parents’ and her grandfather’s eyes. As the parent of two young adults, Charles-Antoine and Ann-Frédérique, who are just as much a source of pride to me as my little Éloïse, I hope that we can help our young people feel secure once again.5Anecdote Reasoning · 13 wordsLet us believe in their abilities. They have a right to their dreams.

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