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Sébastien Lemire

207 words · 9 sentences · 13 clauses

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Aside 6%Claims 66%Positioning 4%Thanks 18%The ask 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 13 wordsperhaps this is nothing more than a tall tale that started in Rouyn, AsideClaims · 136 wordsbut in the early part of the last century, two Anishinabe hunters, the Mackimoot brothers, returned to their community with a glittering stone from Conia Asini.1 Then, a prospector from Nova Scotia, Edmund Horne, took his canoe to the township of Rouyn.2 Once there, potentially as a result of contact with the Anishinabe, he discovered a huge copper deposit. Shortly thereafter buildings began to spring up, including Jos Dumulon’s famous general store, the Osisko Hotel, the Horne mine and smelter, 4and the house that belonged to my great-grandfather Eugène Lemire. On May 5, exactly 100 years ago today, Rouyn became a town, a few weeks after Norcanda, 3which is what we would still be calling it today had it not been for a distracted printer. Rouyn-Noranda is the copper capital and self-proclaimed cultural capital of Quebec.5 Positioning · 8 wordsIt is also the capital of endless possibilities.Positioning Thanks · 38 wordsI would like to take this opportunity to highlight the incredible journey of our hockey team, the Huskies, who truly reflect who we are: often overlooked but hard-working, proud people with heart and soul who never give up.Thanks The ask · 12 wordsI would like to welcome everyone to join us in the celebrations.

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