Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 69%Reasoning 4%Thanks 22%The ask 5%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 56 wordsKelly Morrisseau was murdered 20 years ago this year.1This young indigenous woman, who was seven months pregnant, was found at the entrance to Gatineau Park, less than seven kilometres from Parliament.23Twenty years later, her killer remains unknown.4There are thousands of Kelly Morrisseaus, young girls and women who have gone missing or been murdered.Reasoning · 7 wordsWe have a duty to remember them.Thanks · 38 wordsToday, on Red Dress Day, let us honour the memory of the women, girls and other people who have been murdered, 5as well as those who have gone missing, whose families have never been able to find them.ThanksClaims · 62 wordsWe know that indigenous women are overrepresented among victims of femicide, domestic violence and vulnerable living conditions, 6and yet the 231 calls for justice from the national inquiry still have not been addressed by the federal government.7We know this is happening right under our noses, just like the murder of Kelly Morrisseau 20 years ago, less than seven kilometres from Parliament.8The ask · 8 wordsLet us remember and let us take action.Vague promise