“Mr. Speaker, Alto has confirmed that the section of high-speed rail between Montreal and Ottawa will go through 1,700 properties. With no input from the owners, 500 of our best pieces of farmland will be cut in half. When the Alto people tell us that they are consulting towns and farmers, it is all for show, because they already know exactly where they want to go and what land they want to expropriate. Alto is steamrolling our farmers. Will the Prime Minister finally ask it to get the farmers’ consent, instead of running roughshod over them?”
Statement grade
B+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Promise 84%Claims 16%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Promise · 64 wordsof course we are going to get the farmers’ consent.Vague promiseOf course we are going to work with communities, with mayors, with reeves, with all the stakeholders in Ontario and Quebec.Vague promiseWe are going to build green technology that will be a game-changer for mobility in Canada.We are going to invest in this project because Canada is ready to welcome cutting-edge mobility technologies.Claims · 12 wordsIt will make a difference in the lives of 40% of Canadians.1Partly on point