“Mr. Speaker, the Alto steamroller is barrelling down on the people of Mirabel for the high-speed train project. At first, Alto employees were knocking on people’s doors to ask permission to perform inspections on their property, but now, they are sending letters to try to buy unlimited access to properties for three years, day or night, for $1,500. Imagine how stressful that is for citizens who have not been consulted, but who are being visited by employees and receiving letters implying that their property will be expropriated. Will the government pause the Alto project and try to earn social licence instead of intimidating people in their own homes?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 47 wordsthe member is all up in arms because workers are surveying the land and doing all the work that needs to be done for a 1,000-kilometre high-speed rail line between Quebec City and Toronto that people dream of.1Stakeholders, including in the agriculture sector, will be involved.Vague promisePositioning · 24 wordsPeople dream of having that great technology here in Canada, and they are taking note of the opposition and demagoguery from the Bloc Québécois.PositioningOff point
