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Rebecca Alty

85 words · 3 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Lori Idlout (Liberal)
“Uqaqtittiji, May 5 is Red Dress Day, a day to honour the memory of missing and murdered indigenous women, girls and 2SLGBTQI+ people and to reaffirm our commitment to ending this national crisis. Could the Minister of Crown-Indigenous Relations please update the House on the work our government is doing to build a stronger, safer country for indigenous women, girls and 2SLGBTQI+ people?”
Statement grade
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Average 89 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 8%Claims 60%Promise 32%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 7 wordsending the crisis is of utmost importance.Partly on point Claims · 51 wordsWe are strengthening protections through legislation to crack down on human trafficking and gender-based violence, and through critical investments in shelters, supportive housing and healing centres like the Deh Gáh Got’îê First Nation’s shelter in the Northwest Territories or the Aqqusariaq recovery centre in Iqaluit, 1which is set to open soon. Promise · 27 wordsWe will continue to work in partnership with survivors, families and communities to address the root causes of this violence and build a safer country for all.Vague promise

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