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Eleanor Olszewski

60 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Blake Richards (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, do you know what Albertans see as the problem with the Liberal government? Every promise of change has turned into another charge on the national credit card. Canadians are now paying more: more at the grocery store, more for housing and more in taxes, all to cover for reckless Liberal overspending. When will the Liberal Prime Minister get serious and end his costly credit card budgeting so that Canadians can afford to live?”
Statement grade
C
60 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 17%Claims 63%The ask 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 10 wordsmy fellow Conservatives should listen to the people they represent.PositioningOff point Claims · 38 wordsEdmonton Chamber of Commerce president Doug Griffiths said he was “excited to see that the federal government is taking a bullish stance on Canadian projects, 1and signalling confidence in Canada’s economic potential to the rest of the world.”2Partly on point The ask · 12 wordsI hope Conservative MPs remove their partisan blinders and support our plan.Off point

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