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Patty Hajdu

109 words · 2 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Eric Melillo (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals are on track to add $1 trillion to the national debt. This is the cost of a decade of Liberal credit card budgeting. Now the Liberal Prime Minister, despite his illusions, has added more taxes, more costs and more debt, more of the same. He is just another Liberal. As a result, they are going to be paying more on interest payments this year than on health care. Will the Liberal Prime Minister finally get serious and cancel his credit card budgeting so that Canadians can afford to live?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 58%Claims 42%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 54 wordsit is disappointing to hear a northern Ontario member of Parliament run down the very things that he himself knows northern Ontario leaders and workers have been advocating for, for years, such as investment in infrastructure, investment in major projects, investment in mining and investment in the kinds of things that create great-paying jobs, Motive imputedClaims · 46 wordsand on top of it, they are endorsed by people who are training skilled trades workers across the country, like Canada’s Building Trades Unions, the IBEW and the colleges in his own riding, 1which are excited and enthusiastic about building those very well-paying jobs with Canadians. Positioning · 9 wordsI am disappointed in his advocacy, or lack thereof.PositioningOff point

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