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Rachel Bendayan

120 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I am wondering if my colleague could provide some additions to her comments about getting a good deal with the United States, with a “good deal” being defined as what is in the best interest of Canadians. Whatever time it takes, it is absolutely critical that the government focus its attention on getting the best deal possible and that it is consistent with what has taken place over the last year. That has been a holistic approach, whether it is building one Canada, the major projects program or the number of initiatives the government has taken to date to build on Canada’s economy, to look at other opportunities to trade and to bring in additional investments. There is a litany of things that the government has done to build Canada strong, a strong country for all people. Could my colleague provide her thoughts on why it is so important to take that holistic approach and wait to get the best deal?”
Statement grade
B
78 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Procedure 21%Claims 60%Reasoning 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 16 wordsthat is a very large question to respond to in a very short period of time.Procedure Claims · 45 wordsWhat we need to get is a good deal, Vague promiseand we are working with our American partners in order to get to that deal.Vague promise We are in constant communication and are confident that at the end of the day Canada will get a great deal.Unearned certainty Reasoning · 23 wordsIt is important for us also, in parallel, as we are doing, to advance the major projects that will help build this country. Claims · 27 wordsI am very proud of the projects we are working on, including our high-speed train, including expanding the port of Montreal and including the port of Churchill.123 Procedure · 9 wordsI could go on and on about this topic.Procedure

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