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Simon-Pierre Savard-Tremblay

105 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Amarjeet Gill (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank the member for the excellent speech he gave and the concerns he displayed. Manufacturing industries are closing. Canadian workers and businesses already know there is no deal on the tariffs coming any time soon. Jobs are moving south. The U.S. is offering incentives for the manufacturing sector while the Liberal government is offering delays, higher taxes, more red tape and no clear path forward. Why are the Liberals making it harder to build and produce in Canada? Can the member explain the impacts of higher taxes, more regulations and the lack of a real plan to support our industries?”
Statement grade
C
64 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 24%Reasoning 26%Claims 25%The ask 26%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 25 wordsI do not think it is up to me to explain the behaviour of the Liberal government. That is not my function, not my job.Positioning Reasoning · 27 wordsThat said, I would like to clarify that some regulations may be good and some taxes may be good. It all depends on how they are applied.Partly on point Claims · 26 wordsAs for the rest, this sovereign wealth fund is sovereign in name only. In fact, we voted with the Conservatives on this during their opposition day.1Off point The ask · 27 wordsConsidering our proposals to help sectors in urgent need, I hope that the Conservatives will vote in favour of our opposition motion, as we did for theirs.Partly on point

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