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Marianne Dandurand

127 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Paul Connors (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, first of all, I want to thank my colleague for her commitment and dedication to getting this issue solved. In my riding of Avalon and in many ridings throughout our country, as was just highlighted so many times, cellular connectivity is very poor and in most cases does not exist. There are instances in Avalon when police officers, firefighters and other emergency responders cannot be contacted. It is a huge issue. Families also cannot communicate with each other. In today’s society, people use connectivity in order to make sure we are well connected and that everyone is connected with us. How would the bill address the connectivity gaps that exist in my riding of Avalon and in other rural areas throughout Canada?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 83 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 46%Thanks 19%Reasoning 35%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 14 wordsI have been working with my colleague, who is chair of the rural caucus.2Partly on point Thanks · 11 wordsHe is a member who is really engaged on this issue.Thanks Claims · 44 wordsWe have been talking a lot about it, and not only talking but taking action as well.Vague promise We met with Bell and Rogers to talk about how they are helping with this, what their challenges are and where they want to go with it.1Partly on point Thanks · 13 wordsI thank the member for his involvement and commitment on this important issue.Thanks Reasoning · 45 wordsYes, the bill would help in Avalon. We would have a better map of the situation, and then we could then address the situation by prioritizing rural places that are a bit outside the scope, so the people in the member’s riding can be connected.

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