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Laila Goodridge

166 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 100 / 100
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Claims 72%Reasoning 16%The ask 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 101 wordstoday is McHappy day, a day when every purchase at McDonald’s helps support families through the Ronald McDonald House charities.1 In Alberta, 65% of families live outside a city with a children’s hospital, meaning that many families must travel far from home and their support networks to access specialized care.2 In these moments, Ronald McDonald Houses provide a home away from home to families right across Canada. Last year, from Fort McMurray—Cold Lake alone, 52 families benefited from Ronald McDonald House stays, each bringing a little more normalcy and a chance for kids to be kids and for families to connect.3 Reasoning · 27 wordsWhen a child is seriously ill, families should not have to worry about where they will sleep or where their next meal is going to come from. Claims · 18 wordsRonald McDonald House provides comfort, stability and a place to stay during some of life’s most difficult moments. The ask · 20 wordsI encourage all Canadians to take part in McHappy day and help make a meaningful difference for families in need.

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